Book reviews are subjective. I tend to rate books not according to how “perfect” they are, seem to be, or are said to be in general but rather to how perfect they are to me.
Dancing on the Moon by Linda Leigh Hargrove
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Description: When an abusive relationship forces Dr. Katrina Mason to take a math teaching job at a high school in another state, she’s pleasantly surprised by how much she enjoys it. That is, until she gets a lewd unsigned note to the school’s Valentine dance—a note using the stage name she once had as a stripper. When handsome Principal Nate Thomas finds out about Katrina’s provocative past, will he be inviting her to leave the job?
My thoughts: The title of this short ChristFic romance story has a magical feel, and the lights and laughter on the cover made me decide it was about time to give this one a go.
For me, the read felt a little imbalanced in a way I think may be pretty common in romance: The story shows why she’d be falling for him, but I didn’t see as much showing why he’d be falling for her. It’s a little different if a romantic tale establishes early that the two parties involved already have a solid friendship or they otherwise know each other well, and now they’re taking off from there. If that isn’t really the case, it’s all the more important for me to see characters who don’t only have interesting backstory and inward thoughts but who also outwardly show, in their interactions with their love interest, why they’re a worthwhile, equal match for that person.
The relationship here could have used a better balance of give and take and interesting dialogue on both sides. I also think some deeper development could have kept the declarations of love from feeling like such a leap. The state/progress of this couple’s relationship felt more like the time to enter a conscious, mutual “liking” phase at the end. A good place to start going on dates.
But anyhow, I’m being pretty technical over this read that does deliver what most would expect when picking it up. It’s a quick, positive story where two people with complicated pasts have the blessing of finding each other.